Posted by: nancycurteman | May 26, 2015

Deep Point of View is No Mystery

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mystery1Deep Point of View is no mystery. It is a style of writing that has become very popular in recent years. In this piece I will define Deep POV and share strategies for using it.

What is meant by Deep Point of View?

Deep Point of View simply means that everything that happens in a scene where a main character is present is revealed through the eyes, ears. thoughts and emotions of that character. In short, nothing stands between a reader and the character because the reader is actually inside the character’s head and viewing everything from that character’s perspective.

What are some strategies for writing in Deep Point of View?

  • Remove nearly all traces of a narrator. If you place an invisible narrator between the reader and the character, you’ve inserted an authorial intrusion and distanced the reader from the character.
  • Make sure to only reveal to your readers what your current POV character knows.  For example don’t write, “He didn’t notice Mary leave the kitchen.” If your POV character didn’t notice it, then the reader can’t see it, either.
  • Leave out words such as: He thought or wondered or saw something.
  • Eliminate dialogue tags by replacing them with character action.
    Example: Bob peered into the refrigerator. “I see you took the last beer.”
  • Don’t write lengthy exposition, backstory, and description. Work it in through the characters thoughts, observations, dialogue and actions. Example: Mary gazed at the cloudless sky. It’s just like my childhood summers in Utah with Grandma.
  • Eliminate passive voice. Have your characters do the actions. Make your character the subject of the sentence.
    Example: Mary felt the stinging slap not Mary was slapped.
  • Don’t name an emotion. Make your character feel it.
    Example: Not: She was humiliated. But: Her cheeks burned and she ran from the room holding back sobs.
  • Italics are not necessary in Deep POV when a character is simply reporting his thoughts.
    Example: He stared at the angry bull and shook his head. It could trample a person to death in ten seconds.
  • Don’t have characters notice things they wouldn’t normally care about like brand names or designer labels.
    Example: John rode into town after a month on the cattle range. He noticed the pretty girl in the Chanel suit. (Most cowboys wouldn’t notice a Chanel label).
  • Leave out prepositional phrases used to clarify an action.
    Example: He clenched his teeth and glared at her in anger. (The actions make it clear he was angry. No need to explain to your reader).

Deep Point of view is no mystery. It’s a good POV writing technique, but not the only one. Only use it if it works for you.

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Posted by: nancycurteman | May 13, 2015

How to Solve the Interior Monologue Mystery

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the_thinkerInterior monologue is really no mystery. It is the expression of a character’s thoughts, feelings, and impressions in a narrative. It is a way to present a character’s inner emotions and sensations to the reader. The written word is the only method that allows readers of fiction to know a character’s thoughts directly. It’s not possible in movies or radio broadcasts. We can only guess what the character is thinking based on his comments and body language. This ability to experience what life is like inside a fictional character’s head, witnessing everything they think and feeling everything they feel, is one of the main reasons people read fiction. This ability is one of the huge advantages of novels and short stories.

Interior monologues can be short—just a quick line of thought, or long—a paragraph or even a few pages. Short interior monologues are best placed in the middle of scenes. Long interior monologues work best during interludes between scenes.

There are two kinds of interior monologues, direct and indirect. In direct monologues there is no author intrusion. The reader is overhearing the thoughts flowing directly through the characters mind. Indirect monologues are selected and narrated by the author with his evaluative comments.

Writing interior monologues is no mystery. Here are some basic strategies:
• Never use quotation marks around a character’s thoughts.

• Place short interior monologues in scenes where the action and dialogue in novels take place. It’s important not to disrupt the action in the scene. One or two lines of thought will not slow the pace of the story.

• Save the long interior monologues for the interludes in which the action has slowed and the character is taking time to review what happened in the previous scene and to generate his next action plan. Character pondering may take several paragraphs or even a few pages.

• Most novels are written in third person past tense. In this case, italicizing interior monologue is not necessary. When both the thought and the text surrounding it are in the same voice and tense there is no need for italics. In addition, italics are difficult to read. On rare occasions italics can be used to emphasize a character’s thoughts.

• Using tags such as “she thought” and “he wondered” is usually not necessary. When the narration is close and intimate, and the language is beginning to approximate the viewpoint character’s own speaking voice, tags won’t be necessary.

• It’s important to make it clear that the words are the character’s thoughts, and not the narrator’s words.

Interior monologue is a great tool for sharing your character’s inner emotions and sensations with your readers.

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Posted by: nancycurteman | May 2, 2015

The Black Forest: Kirsch, Cake, and Cuckoo Clocks

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Germany takes great pride in the beautiful mountain range they call The Black Forest. This sea of green is located in the state of Baden-Württemberg in southwestern Germany. The name, Black Forest, comes from the dark green colors of the conifer trees that make up the forest.

The region is famous for its handcrafted cuckoo clocks. We visited the House of Black Forest Clocks, a family owned producer of cuckoo clocks. We saw a demonstration of the process involved in making these unusual clocks. The quality and variety of the clocks was astounding. There was even a huge clock with life-size dancers performing on the hour.

The Black Forest area is also famous for its Black Forest Cherry Cake. The cakes are a luscious combination of chocolate, whipped cream, cherries and a generous portion of Kirsch. Kirsch liqueur is a German specialty made from tiny sour cherries about the size of blueberries.th-2

The lovely scenery, adorable cuckoo clocks and Black Forest Cherry Cake make a trip to the Black Forest an unforgettable experience.

 

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Posted by: nancycurteman | April 24, 2015

Secrets of a Well-Paced Novel

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 top_secret Pacing refers to the variations in the rate of speed your characters move through scenes and chapters to reach the end of their story. Pacing differs with the specific needs of a story. There are times when you will want to slow things down or speed them up. If an event in a story is important, slow it so readers can linger over it. If it is not, speed through it so you can quickly move to more interesting scenes. To understand the variables involved in pacing, we need to understand the relationship between scenes and interludes.

Interludes happen between scenes. During an interlude characters think about or discuss with another character what happened in the previous scene and then decide what they will do in the next scene. Interludes should happen more quickly than scenes. Interludes can be a couple of pages long or as short as two words: “Two hours later…”

In a scene, a person or a situation must be altered. If nothing is changed, it’s an unnecessary scene. Pacing can vary inside a scene. For example, the scene’s opening is usually not filled with action. In pacing terms, it should happen fast and be over quickly. The action part of a scene should be full of conflict, and needs meticulous attention. This means showing in such a way that everything essential to the scene is described in vivid, sensory detail.

Scenes:

• Create scenes that read slowly, are packed with action and engender some intense emotions in your reader.
• Focus on your character’s movements, emotions, attempts at solving his problem.
• Use sensory details to create a feeling of immediacy and urgency. This makes a scene feel faster even though it takes several pages to read. Let your reader see the gaping wound, experience the fear, see the sweat.
• Buildup to the scene’s climax.
• Keep sentences short. Use some fragments.
• Replace adjectives and adverbs with strong verbs and nouns. • Keep dialogue tight.

Interludes:
• Create interludes that read fast and allow your reader to catch her breath.
• Use descriptive passages such as culture, character background, local color, clothing, and weather.
• Have your character think about his situation, make decisions and plan his next action.
• Use longer sentences with more visual details.
• Accompany dialogue with more description.

Pacing is a complex literary skill. Consider carefully how you will pace the events in your story.    

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Posted by: nancycurteman | April 17, 2015

11 Characterization Strategies

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A few weeks ago, I began a series of posts on writing craft. I listed 5 elements with brief descriptions of each. I indicated my next series of blog posts would explore in greater detail each of the 5 elements. I posted a piece about Plot. Now I will detail Characterization. In my general writing craft post I defined Characterization as the process an author uses to reveal the personality of a character either directly (author description) or indirectly (the reader must infer what the character is like). Here are 11 characterization strategies with examples:

Physical Description is the most common. It is not complex. You simply describe what you want your reader to see.
Dark brown hair cascaded over her shoulders almost touching an ample waist. Bright brown eyes, rosy cheeks and plump lips drew attention away from her large nose.

Names can tell a lot about a character’s background, educational level, profession and where they live.
A man who answers to the name Junior may not conjure up the same image as one who answers to the name Big Mike. Candy LaMar presents a different kind of woman from Elizabeth Goldmeir.  Janek Kitajewski may have a very different background than Jim Smith.

Actions depict how characters act physically or verbally and how they interact with other characters. Their behavior can indicate whether they are humble or arrogant, good-natured or mean-spirited, sympathetic or selfish, refined or uncouth.
She walked right past the new girl, refusing to even acknowledge her existence. She then approached a friend, cupped her hand to her friend’s ear, pointed at the new girl and sneered.

Environment refers to the world in which a character lives, or has lived. A person’s country, city, home or bedroom can reveal a lot about him and in fact, plays an important role on his development.
As soon as he mentioned he lived on a farm in the mountains of West Virginia, she knew he would have a difficult time fitting into her Manhattan, high-rise world.

Interests can be important in characterization. Frequently certain personality types fit certain kinds of interests. A chess player may have a very different approach to life than a fast-paced video gamer. A rock climber may view life from a different perspective than a beachcomber.
His intense interest in his gun collection made her uncomfortable.

Mannerisms are gestures, stances, repetitive behaviors. They can characterize story people as annoying, strange, lovable or any way you want to depict them.
He noticed she seemed to continually blink her eyes. Not a good habit. He decided to quit his own bad habit of cracking his knuckles.

Attitude describes how a character looks at life’s events, obstacles and little foibles. A character may view other characters and experiences with a positive, negative, biased, superior or neutral attitude.
She stopped making suggestions because he always greeted her ideas with a disdainful expression.

Dialogue is not just the words a character says, but the way in which they say them. The words they use can indicate intelligence, ignorance or educational background. The speed at which characters speak can indicate nervousness or relaxed. If the speech is overly hesitant, the character may be shy or unsure about something. Specific accents can indicate the speaker’s nationality.
He spoke in a slow drawl, halting every few seconds. She thought he might be a slow thinker from Mississippi or just plain scared to death.

Thoughts reveal the true feelings of a character. Are they confident or insecure, happy or sad, frightened or brave, honest or dishonest.
I have to get away from him before I go crazy, she thought. I’ll leave tomorrow while he’s at work. She kissed her husband and rolled to her side of the bed. “Goodnight, Darling,” she said.

The way other story people view your character is an effective characterization strategy. They can react to him any way you choose. They can admire him, hate him, envy him, feel uneasy, excited, anxious, angry or scared around him. You can have them view him quite differently from the way he views himself.
He smiled often, but his colleagues viewed him as a dangerous threat to be feared and watched.

Past experiences make us what we are. Your character is the product of everything that has happened to him in his life. Give your character a unique history to which he has responded in his own unique way and you will have a memorable character.
The freezing cold foxholes reminded Jake of the icy Minnesota winters of his boyhood. Maybe not quite so cold.

Careful attention to characterization will create a unique and memorable character.

 

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Posted by: nancycurteman | April 9, 2015

5 Plot Points in a Novel

villainRecently I began a series of posts on the elements of writing craft. I listed 5 strategies with brief descriptions of each. My next series of blog posts will explore each of the 5 elements in greater detail. In this post I will share ideas about Plot using a simple story as an example.

As I wrote in “5 Elements of Writing Craft:” Plot is a roadmap from the beginning of a story to its resolution. It is a sequence of connected, causal events that lead to the final dénouement. What does that roadmap look like? It has several points of interest that we have to travel through on our way to our final destination, the end of the story. We call these plot points. Here are the five basic plot points—Introduction, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action, Conclusion.

Introduction: The function of this plot point is to introduce the background information a reader must understand in order to know what is going to happen in the story and why. It introduces the main characters, their personalities, lifestyle, needs and goals. It presents the setting which includes where and when the story happens.

Two children, a shy little girl and her gregarious older brother, live in a cottage in the woods in England. Their father is out of work and money. Their stepmother complains that starvation is at their doorstep and tries to convince Father he must abandon the children in the dark forest to fend for themselves.

Rising action: This will be the longest section of the story. It’s a major portion of the novel because your character is headed toward her goal when an occurrence blocks her. In Rising Action the major conflict begins. The main character must deal with a serious complication or problem. The action gets moving when the main character tackles the problem. In this section you reveal the internal and external conflicts of the characters. Conflicts with society, nature, fate, or other characters. This also shows the progression of the story. In this part of the book, the main character is in crisis and driven to action. Excitement and suspense build. Tension increases. If done well, this section will drive your reader to intense worry about what will happen next.

The young boy overhears the stepmother’s plans. His hopes to attend the village school and become a teacher are threatened as is his very life and that of his shy sister. Now he sets a new goal—survival. He decides to drop breadcrumbs along the path as his father leads the children into the woods. His plan to follow the breadcrumbs home fails. Hungry and tired the two children come upon a candy house. Food! Now they will survive. Alas, an even greater problem arises when they discover the owner of the house is a witch who intends to gobble them up.

Climax: The climax is usually not long. It is the turning point of the story. This turning point may be physical, emotional or both. At this point it may seem the character will fail. The climax will involve suspense, excitement, fear and surprise on the part of the reader and the story people as the characters come face to face with the problem and try to resolve it. This is also the lesson of the story, the message or metaphor that you, the writer, hope to accomplish by writing the piece.

Locked in a cage and helpless, the boy can do nothing but accept his destiny. Fortunately, his little sister gathers her courage and seizes an opportunity to shove the wicked witch into her own fiery oven thus preventing the witch from dining on her big brother. Goal achieved.

Falling Action: The story is ending. Things begin to get back to normal. There is no more conflict. Falling Action shows the outcome of the actions or decisions the character has made.

Little sister releases big brother from the cage. They find the witch’s hoarded gold. They discover their father has been searching for them when he shows up at the front door of the witch’s house.

Resolution: Resolution ties up loose ends and alludes to what the future holds for the characters. The conflicts are resolved and the story concludes with either a happy or sad ending. Make this plot point short.

Father takes the children and the gold home to the little cottage where stepmother no longer lives. The little family is never hungry again.

Plot can make or break your novel, so give it a good deal of thought.

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Posted by: nancycurteman | March 31, 2015

5 Elements of Writing Craft

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th-1Writing craft consists of the basic elements that make our story readable. It consists of strategies such as plot, characterization, dialogue, pacing, dramatic structure, and point of view. Here are 5 elements of writing craft with a brief definition of each. In future blog posts I will explore each element in greater depth.

Plot is a roadmap from the beginning of a story to its resolution. It is a sequence of connected, causal events that lead to the final dénouement.

Characterization is the process an author uses to reveal the personality of a character either directly (author description) or indirectly (the reader must infer what the character is like). The descriptions may include how the character speaks, thinks, feels and acts. How others perceive the character as well as his physical appearance are part of characterization.

Dialogue is the way characters communicate. It may be conversation between characters or it may be interior thoughts.

Pacing is the variations in the rate of speed your characters move through scenes and chapters to reach the end of the story. Consideration is given to when to slow the action and when to speed it up.

Point of View is the perspective from which the story is told. There are three: first person, second person and third person. Sometimes authors alternate points of view.

It’s important to understand that it doesn’t matter how perfect your writing craft is if your story is not exciting, unique and compelling. Perfect craft will never take improve a boring, cliché story.

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Posted by: nancycurteman | March 24, 2015

5 Ways to Show You Respect Your Mystery Readers’ Intelligence

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th-1Mystery writers need to respect the intelligence of their readers. Mystery fans have a natural interest in solving puzzles. Don’t spoil their enjoyment of sleuthing by explaining everything they should be allowed to discover. Here are 5 ways to show you respect your readers’ intelligence.

  1. Don’t insert yourself into the story by explaining the meaning of what’s happening. Allow the reader to respond to the characters and action on their own.
  2. Don’t overdue the use of adverbs in an effort to describe actions. Verbs should carry the weight of the description. Use the most vivid verbs you can find.
  3. Don’t overdue adjectives an effort to describe places, characters and feelings. Add just enough description to provide a sense of the whole character.
  4. Don’t tell your readers how they should feel. Provoke emotion through character reactions and interior dialogue.
  5. Don’t reveal your own personal biases through your writing. Better to write factual descriptions rather than explicit emotional direction. Better to remain invisible. Let your readers’ own emotional and psychological backstories and personal, intimate temperaments dictate how they respond to your characters and events.

Have faith in the intelligence of your mystery readers. Their personal input based on their own life experiences will increase their enjoyment of your mystery novel.

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Posted by: nancycurteman | March 14, 2015

Edith Piaf: A French Icon

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thEdith Piaf was Paris. In fact, she was the symbol of all France. In the early thirties her penetrating, defiant, tough, pugnacious yet wistful voice rang out in Paris, first on the streets, later in the clubs and music halls and at last on record players. She sang of the hard times, hard luck and heartbreak that reflected her own life.

Edith Gassion, later renamed Piaf (sparrow) was born in 1915 in a doorway under a light post on Rue 72 de Belleville, a working class section of Paris. At two months old, her mother, a café singer, handed her over to her alcoholic, maternal grandmother who kept the baby’s bottle filled with red wine. Her father found her two years later, dirty, drunk and half starved. He sent her to live with her paternal grandmother who owned a brothel. The filles de joies took good care of her treating her like a baby doll.

At age 15 she became a street singer for coins and was discovered by Louis Leplée who gave her the chance to sing in his cabaret. There in a simple skirt and sweater before an audience that included Chevalier and Mistinguett, Piaf became an overnight sensation.

In 1939 Europe was on the brink of World War II. During the Nazi occupation Piaf was ordered to sing for Herr Goebbels. She flouted the order by arriving hours too late. But she willingly entertained French soldiers in POW camps.

In 1947 Piaf found two loves—Contender for world middleweight boxing champion Marcel Cerdan and the United States of America where she would perform again and again. Her romance with Ceran ended with his death in a plane crash. Her romance with the United States endured the rest of her life. For each performance in the United States and in every country she always charged a flat one thousand American dollars per night.th-1

In the 1950’s life for Piaf who was barely 4’10” with stooped shoulders, ulcers and arthritis became a series of physical collapses that seemed to be ending her career. In 1959 she arose from a hospital bed and embarked on what the French press labeled “Piaf’s suicide tour.” Friends tried to dissuade her from the tour but she insisted on going, saying, “I much sing! Singing is all I have. If I do not sing, I will die.”

That Piaf was finished was the talk of Europe. She was a physical wreck—broke, broken and dying. Then the announcement came: Piaf would open at her traditional Paris stand, the Olympia Music Hall for a month’s engagement. Stooped, battered, ravaged, her hair a cobwebby nimbus about her face, Piaf stood before a packed house and sang as never before. Day after day people lined up in the street for tickets.

Piaf continued performing until her death in 1963. A hundred thousand French visited Piafs home in the weekend following her death. Four thousand attended her burial in Père LaChaise Cemetary. Edith Piaf will forever remain a cherished symbol of France.

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Posted by: nancycurteman | March 6, 2015

How to Avoid Melodrama in Sad Mystery Novel Scenes

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th-2Melodrama has no place in a mystery novel. Unfortunately, melodrama can creep into the sad scenes that are essential to a convincing murder mystery story and sabotage the hoped for effect. There are ways to avoid turning a serious emotional scene into a farce.

Don’t be too explicit. Words that tell how the character feels–heartbroken, devastated, sad, miserable, wretched–do not allow the reader to participate in the emotion. You need to let the reader imagine the emotion based on their real life experience with tragedy rather than telling them how to feel.

Show how your character is reacting to a tragedy through her body language. She moves in slow motion, her body droops, her speech sounds flat, lip trembles. She hangs her head, gulps back tears. Your reader will recognize these symptoms of sadness. Let the emotion come from subtext.

Make character reactions realistic. Consider how the type of character you created would react. A stoic male would react differently than a sensitive little girl.

Keep sad scenes short. A few paragraphs that show your character’s pain will have much more impact than a full chapter of dwelling on the tragic event.

Build up to the sad scene. In earlier chapters, emphasize close relationships between characters. In the case of a death, show the importance of the victim in the lives of other characters and emphasize his good qualities.

Draw a connection to a previous tragedy. Maybe your character’s mother died of cancer and now your character’s best friend has been diagnosed with the same kind of cancer.

Make character reactions realistic. No one in real life would say something like “This is horrid beyond words,” when they witness an accident or other tragedy.

These are techniques you can use to avoid melodrama in mystery novel sad scenes.

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