Posted by: nancycurteman | January 20, 2013

#Revising and Rewriting a Novel is no Mystery

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akillerideaRevising and rewriting a novel is no mystery if you go about it methodically. Yes, it’s a lot of work. Yes, it takes time. Yes, it’s a critical part of an author’s job. Revising and rewriting is my favorite step in creating a novel because I come up with some of my best scenes during this segment of producing my story.

Preliminary Preparation:
I begin my revising and rewriting process by sticking my novel in a drawer or in a computer folder and not looking at it for at least three weeks. Just before I start actively revising and rewriting, I make a complete copy of my manuscript and store it on my computer and on an external hard drive. I will continue to make copies on a regular basis as I make revisions. That way, if I cut or add something I shouldn’t, I can always return to the previously saved version.

Overview:
The next step in revising and rewriting my novel is to sit in a comfortable chair with a packet of post-its and do a full read-through. I want to get the feel for the basic impact my novel might have on a reader. I place a post-it on any page where
• I start to skim the page
• my mind wanders
• I can’t find a connection to a previous story event
• character motivation is missing
• I find boring or meandering spots.
I keep these pages marked without revising and go on to scene review because it may happen that I will cut a whole scene that includes some of these pages.

Scene Review
Now I do another read in which I examine my scenes. For each scene, I write a one or two statement of what it’s about. This needs to include a clear goal and outcome.  When I finish this, I will end up with a complete list of scenes. I look at each two-line summary and ask does this scene
• move the story forward?
• show or reveal character and character motivation?
• present  important new information about the story or a character?
• reveal a plot or character emotional turning point?
• introduce or deepen a story problem?
• have conflict?
• connect or transition it from a previous scene?
• end  with a question or problem?
If I can’t answer yes to at least one or two of these questions for each scene, I look at the scene with a jaundiced eye and will either revise it or cut it.

Writing Craft
Next I look at more detailed writing craft. I use highlighters and pencils to mark problems in the areas listed below
• Are the details consistent?
• Do people speak and behave in the same way throughout?
• Are there characters that do not contribute to the storyline?
• Are there long, slow “ho hum” sections?
• Is there too much description and interior monologue? Too many qualifiers (adjectives and adverbs), and useless phrases (As you know, In fact, still, just)?
• Is there enough foreshadowing to make the reader say at the end of the novel, “Yes, I remember that!” In a mystery novel, these are usually clues.
Here is where I will do some heavy revising and rewriting and try to add even more emotional and physical conflict or suspense. I will also add more sensory notes if possible: sounds, smells, feelings, and sights.

Line Editing
I check for periods, question marks, quotation marks, capitals, spelling, paragraphing, word usage—in short, did I use good English grammar.

Revising and rewriting a novel is no mystery if you use a methodical approach.

More Tips:

Writing is Rewriting is Revising: 7 Ways to Do it
Developmental Editing: How to do it
How to Edit Your Mystery Novel

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  1. Looks like you left out one of your own steps. I’m assuming you PRINT OUT your book, and work on paper (as it is difficult to add post-its to a computer screen. ))

    Good list of steps!

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    • Richard, You’re right. You do need to print out a copy. However, one could do this read-through on the computer or using a pdf on a tablet or smart phone. In this case you would mark pages with a bookmark or highlight the page.

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  2. Sounds like a great deal of thought and writing. Glad you enjoy it! These tips are very helpful for me too! Thanks.

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    • Evelyn, I’m glad some of the tips are helpful. As I indicated above, this is a way that works for me. For some, editing on the computer works best.

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  3. Super article. Thanks.

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  4. I forgot to ask How many days (working-hours) does that first read-through with yellow stickies take?

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    • I do this first read-through at the rate I would read a regular novel. If I find I slow down or my mind wanders, it takes less than a second to stick a post-it on the page. How long it takes really depends on how fast you would read a novel for pleasure. You’re really putting yourself into the shoes of your future readers. You’re not editing at this point, just noting your reactions to what you read.

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  5. Reblogged this on The Writers' Room.

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